Aphelion

Feel free to ask screenwriting questions if you have them. I did write the book on it....OK, one of the books. (The Screenplay Workbook). But if you're a hopeful screenwriter be prepared for honest answers which are almost always painful to hear. I did the Hollywood thing, had a screenwriting agent,...

Nate,<br><br>Thanks for the update on human survivability in space. Good to know.<br><br>And your comments are very helpful. You're right that this is kind of a cleaning out of the closet. It's an old story, written in early 2002 and was edited once, by my wife--this is also the reason for the many ...

Bill,<br><br>Great critique! It's nice to have readers who know their stuff.<br><br>My only excuse is that I threw out a lot of rules on purpose. When writing it I was picturing it as a Manga cartoon or a comic book (which I wrote many years ago) where the rules of physics no longer applied. In many...

Thanks for the kind words Villa. This was really just an experimental story for me. And the only thing I knew about the story when I began was the tone, hence the dialog you enjoyed. I wrote it from beginning to end without stopping, other than to attend to bodily fuctions, which made it interesting...