A Wonderful Life by Bob Sanhueza

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A Wonderful Life by Bob Sanhueza

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Flash Fiction? Too long, but it had all the elements needed.

A nice little story and good twist at the end.

The writing was Okay, but the story was too short to critque it much. However, what I read I liked and
I think that this one could have been stretched into a well crafted short story.

I liked the telling in this story, and the concept of 'bounded worker' which might be possible under
genetic engineering in the future would become one hell of a legal fight, I'm sure.

Too short of a story, but well worth reading!!!
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