A Question of Remembrance by Kevin Gordon

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A Question of Remembrance by Kevin Gordon

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This is a pretty good story, but it had a kind of shrill quality to parts of it, particularly the character of Stewart, and some of the dialog, especially about the aliens. Over-exaggerated, what I might call psychological melodrama. Tone that down and it would be better; it took me out of the story a little.
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