I'm not sure he WAS still drawn to her. He seemed puzzled by the fact that all the other men of their acquaintance still found her so attractive...Verse wrote:Loving Monica By Phil Davis
I really enjoyed this story. The way the protagonist describes Monica, you feel his sense of contamination and disgust, and the horror that, despite this, he is still drawn to her. I was cringing through the French kisses. Brilliant!
The ending was very good, very neat. Everything clicked into place perfectly.
Bravo!
Anyway, there won't be anything to "click into place" once Monica has the protagonist -- er -- repaired.