Loving Monica by Phil Davis

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Re: Loving Monica by Phil Davis

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Verse wrote:Loving Monica By Phil Davis

I really enjoyed this story. The way the protagonist describes Monica, you feel his sense of contamination and disgust, and the horror that, despite this, he is still drawn to her. I was cringing through the French kisses. Brilliant!

The ending was very good, very neat. Everything clicked into place perfectly.

Bravo!

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I'm not sure he WAS still drawn to her. He seemed puzzled by the fact that all the other men of their acquaintance still found her so attractive...

Anyway, there won't be anything to "click into place" once Monica has the protagonist -- er -- repaired. :shock:
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Re: Loving Monica by Phil Davis

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Phil Davies, you are one sick bastard. :lol: Thanks for the entertainment; it was excellently rendered.

Reading this story was like driving past an accident scene . . . you don't want to see revolting gore, but you can't stop looking, either.

Too bad for the poor protagonist in this story; he almost got away . . .
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Re: Loving Monica by Phil Davis

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McCamy_Taylor wrote:Fun story. And with a happy ending! No more cat boxes to clean!
Yeah, and he won't have to have sex with her again, either!
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