Uh-Oh by Robin Lipinski

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Re: Uh-Oh by Robin Lipinski

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Wow, yet another new commenter! Welcome to the forum, gooberhead!
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Re: Uh-Oh by Robin Lipinski

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A song, a moody, a blue, a song...
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written by: (censored)

So, what it is, that is, is that, I mean.
You know.
Talking the talk but can't remember shit?

A muse of recollection run flat beneath the rim
tilting back another bottle,
forgetting what I did.

She had it coming, her with her soft velvety skin.
He had in spades and thus Hades hunger was perfect for him.
Both married in sin while I?
Forgetting what I did.

Lost my house,
lost my job,
lost my dog, goldfish, and pet rabbit...
lost my mind,
lost my way of life...
Forgetting what I did.

(outside view looking in)

"Ha Ha Ha"
Say what?
"Man, get a fucking life!"

As the needle skips off the center
the vinyl record of life spins
waiting for the hand of God
to make it play again.
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