Lightless by Clinton Van Inman

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Re: Lightless by Clinton Van Inman

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The first stanza was quite clear, but seemed to have nothing to do with the second -- which in turn seemed to have nothing to do with anything I could comprehend.

A lot of poetry intentionally bypasses our forebrains. Sometimes it works marvelously well. To me, this one didn't.
I was raised by humans. What's your excuse?
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