Puella Maris By John M. Marshall

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Re: Puella Maris By John M. Marshall

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I thought it had too many similes in it . . . somewhere about the middle I began to get tired of 'this like that' and 'that like this' . . .otherwise it was nice enough. Very visual. Might have benefited from appealing to the other senses, though.
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