Modification Program By Adam Folgers

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Re: Modification Program By Adam Folgers

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Twilight Zone theme, but the execution (excuse me) is definitely not TZ -- maybe more like Dragnet -- if Dragnet had a Dark Side.

I thought it was a little heavy on jargon, but not to the point of being hard to follow; that gives it an authentic flavor, too. The characters are very convincing.

In the end, I can't help thinking that this C/O's life truly is so shitty that it could logically be considered as punishment for some scumbag. And -- shades of Seanan's article this month -- I do hope the author's life is better than this.

Excellent first effort!
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