Local Time by Tim Laffey

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Re: Local Time by Tim Laffey

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Nice poem; it does a good job of evoking melancholy.

It also reminded me of a pair of books by Stephen Coonts: Saucer, and Saucer: The Conquest. The first one was quite good; the second one not quite as much. Some guys find a flying saucer in a layer of rock that's like some million years old or so.
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rick tornello wrote:we all seem to forget or ignore the fact that this is a poem, not a story. And poetry, generally, is a looser construct than prose.

Think of lyrics in songs, they suggest many times, and are not a doctors prescription to a solution.

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