Eye of Newt By Mike Phillips

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Re: Eye of Newt By Mike Phillips

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Fun story. This wizard is such a bonehead that he wasn't going to last long anyway. Very good job with the ending; I was expecting something different (having to do with a shepherd and a couple of dogs).

I spotted a couple of technical errors, but overall it was pretty well done, especially the dialog and characterization. It even included a little biology lesson.
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