Power By E. S. Strout

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Re: Power By E. S. Strout

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I thought this whole story was in just too much of a hurry to get finished. Examples:
thirty three year-old slim, dark haired and hazel-eyed Susan Grant, M.D. said.
Thirty-four year old subatomic particle physicist Adrian Maas
The five-foot ten inch sandy-haired rail-thin researcher smiled
I think Gino's stories would benefit if he slowed them down some. Let the readers catch their breath.

Funny thing about those aliens; they just barely had their own language. They borrowed Greek to name their spacecraft. Who'd they swipe the FTL from? And how'd they manage to work it without help?

And someone's going to be in BIG trouble for stealing my credit-card number:
7146 3214 8804 9601
JUST KIDDING :lol:
I was raised by humans. What's your excuse?
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