Soul Mates by D.C. Plump Story

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Re: Soul Mates by D.C. Plump Story

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The good news, Mr. Plump, is that you've got spelling, grammar, and punctuation nearly perfect. The only errors I noticed were with the inappropriate use of apostrophes. You also seem to have a good sense for pacing.

Now, you should consider finding some fresh material to apply these skills to.
I was raised by humans. What's your excuse?
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