The Emperor's Servant by Owen Harrison

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Re: The Emperor's Servant by Owen Harrison

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John, you had the same problem with this story that I did. The story is also posted at Creator & the Catalyst, and I left a substantial commentary there:

http://www.creatorandthecatalyst.com/di ... &t=27#p792

The more I think about it, the more I think that Owen knows this story really well in his own head, but just hasn't yet learned how to gracefully present it. The setting, characters and plot have a well-developed feel about them; it's just a struggle to figure it out.
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