The Devil is in This House by Peter Cushnie

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Re: The Devil is in This House by Peter Cushnie

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This story worked pretty well in spite of some unfashionably long paragraphs -- make that, whole passages -- of narration. I can tell that Mr. Cushnie did a lot of thinking about this, because it has a very authentic feel to it. Seamless and shiny, with good use of detail. I liked the conversation between Mother Superior and Father Joseph, and the ending was a bit unexpected.

Good job!
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