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Tell us what you think of the December 2013 issue!

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I feel like I just woke up in the theater, having slept through the second half of the movie.

Lots of typos here.

The setting was pretty decent. Characterization was fair. Dialog wasn't too bad.

Plot, David. Work on plot. This story didn't seem to have one.
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