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Re: A Lucky Man by Botond Teklesz

Posted: July 04, 2014, 05:40:37 PM
by Lester Curtis
Wait--hurricane? Where'd that come from? Mike should have hired a better pilot.

The style was sort of plodding, but I chalk that up to the writer not being a native English speaker. Keep at it, though; you'll get better. Interesting story premise.