Libro Redux by David Ulnar-Slew

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Re: Libro Redux by David Ulnar-Slew

Post by Lester Curtis »

Good tension between the two, but the paragraphs were too long and the ending too abrupt, I thought.

Nice (?) touch in that the MC's suicide would prevent the book from totally corrupting him, but would still give the book more power. The book wins either way. Great dilemma.

This does seem incomplete.
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