Chylomicron by Ed Sullivan

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Re: Chylomicron by Ed Sullivan

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Not bad for what it was--I liked the dialog--but it didn't seem to go anywhere. All the writing gurus say you need conflict and resolution to make a story, and those seem to be missing in this one.
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