Hullabaroo by Kim Mary Trotto

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Re: Hullabaroo by Kim Mary Trotto

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I quite liked this one. The dialog and characterization put you right there.

I agree with Eddie that the ending was too 'telly,' but this is what happens when you're stuck with a short format. Not sure it could have been done much better within the confines of a short word limit.

The last line offers fuel for thought. What will she do, anyway?

Very nice, Kim.
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