Beware Of Hitchhikers II by Jeremy Simons

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Re: Beware Of Hitchhikers II by Jeremy Simons

Post by Lester Curtis »

I'm with Eddie on this one; the two parts should be joined. The whole story comes together that way, as it deserves to, and some material could be cut from the second half.

I especially like the part the truck plays in these: an artifact that ties all the events together, a setting element which doubles as a plot element. Good job with that.
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