The Tide Turns by Dionisio “Don” Traverso Jr.

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Re: The Tide Turns by Dionisio “Don” Traverso Jr.

Post by Lester Curtis »

Very well done. FI know that flash isn't easy, so I appreciate it when I see one so well balanced. My biggest problem is writing graceful endings instead of just having the story hit a wall.
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