- Lester Curtis
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I liked the way God was personified, excusing his non-involvement with a string of philosophical arguments, but of course it would have been unfair of him to interfere. I couldn't figure out exactly why Horus didn't know who he was, but that didn't take anything away from the story.
Overall, I didn't find this story as powerful as "The Ocean of All Her Children", but it's still pretty decent. Check it out.