Story: Time Amok by J. Eckert Lytle

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Re: Story: Time Amok by J. Eckert Lytle

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An interesting story about Jack the Ripper, and one that I enjoyed reading.

A good intro in which the reader’s attention is grabbed---- one of the most important attributes that a story needs. Once the intro gets the setting established, the remainder of the story keeps one’s interest sparked by using good dialogue, humor, character traits and other techniques that evolve a story. The twist about the lesbian and a Catholic was a nice-small beat to the story.

I enjoyed to story very much and must say that I’ve read published stories that were not as good!!
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