The Fittest by Jennifer Leeper

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The Fittest by Jennifer Leeper

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I liked all of it! This story is composed of all the elements needed for short story writing and they’re balanced and crafted very well. This is a very good story to read and analysis. She uses enough science to add to the story yet she doesn’t over do it. She shows and tells when needed. Nice!

One sentence has me a little stumped: She uses man-aged for emphasis. I would use managed instead, but maybe there is some technique of grammar usage that defines her usage.


Good story.
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