Time Out, E.S. Strout
Posted: October 13, 2005, 11:21:23 AM
Reminds me of the Golden Age sci fi and the modern idea-driven sci fi. I enjoyed it.<br><br>Perhaps add a bit more description around the dialogue and put some of the background info. in dialogue into indirect dialogue/summaries?<br><br>Best,<br>Nick Capo<br>(www2.ic.edu/ncapo/)<br><br>