I think it did, and welcome to our little community.Spirit Driven wrote:I hope this review and selected passages will encourage others to read and comment on this story.
David
Discussion of "An Unguarded Moment."
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Re: Discussion of "An Unguarded Moment."
Re: Discussion of "An Unguarded Moment."
A classical opening to a detective story! Yes, and one that didn’t disappoint me from beginning to end. I liked the feel of an old detective story, enjoyed the comments and dialogue throughout the read. The ending was clever with the serial killer getting away by traveling to the future!
Good job.
Good job.
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Re: Discussion of "An Unguarded Moment."
Nice job, Randy. The future will never be the same.
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