"Jamie's Revenge" by George T. Philibin

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Re: "Jamie's Revenge" by George T. Philibin

Post by kailhofer »

I thought Kate had good notes on this one. There were really excellent descriptions engaging the senses, and I, too got hooked.

In fact, I liked all the parts of it except one: how easily Jamie was able to get free and turn the tables. For them to fall so quickly to Jamie's might, it seemed improbable that over all these years no other opportunity had presented itself.

Other than that, good job!
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