Fair Winds by T.D. Minton

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Fair Winds by T.D. Minton

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This is one of the few steampunk stories that I ever read. I liked the Wild Wild West television series the played in the 1960s. I intend to write something in steampunk but haven’t started anything yet.

An interesting story that also has ties to Jules Verne’s writings. The air ships reminds me of the one in Verne’s Master of the World. However, the story centers on an artificial arm that is powered by steam. I would like to see that in action!

The beginning was Okay, but it could have been crafted in a way that grabbed one’s attention better, but it did work. I like the description of gears whirring—I could almost hear them.

The writing was good and the story ended with a twist.

Nice job!
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