Wandering Stars by Ndifreke George

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Lipinski
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Wandering Stars by Ndifreke George

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The title of the poem caught my attention right away.

Then, I was sucked into the piece and saw some messaging that most people will not, though hard to tell if that was your intention or not.

On the face of it, a nice piece of poetry though for some if not the majority (in my opinion) will find it hard to find the meaning. And then again, maybe this is what your intentions were/are.

Underneath the layer of words though, some very interesting messages and a nice prayer to an obvious deity that goes by many names. God. Creator. Lord.

And of course, my opinion means nothing other than to present my view of what I took from your poem.

Good job and look forward to reading more.
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