Vampire Moon by Graham Catt
Posted: March 05, 2018, 07:56:17 PM
The intro starts off by getting ones attention, but the use of unpronounceable names left me a little
overwhelmed with the moons, the systems and with names like Zeezar and Dash Tatters. However, the names weren’t too difficult to remember.
After the intro the story took off and kept me engrossed til the end. This follows the basic need of a story: Grab one’s attention and hold it throughout the story. This story accomplished that which is what all stories should do.
At first with the names used, I thought the story might become hard to follow. I was wrong. The story unfolds very nicely with action from beginning to the end. At no time was I lost as to what was happening in this story.
Good job!
overwhelmed with the moons, the systems and with names like Zeezar and Dash Tatters. However, the names weren’t too difficult to remember.
After the intro the story took off and kept me engrossed til the end. This follows the basic need of a story: Grab one’s attention and hold it throughout the story. This story accomplished that which is what all stories should do.
At first with the names used, I thought the story might become hard to follow. I was wrong. The story unfolds very nicely with action from beginning to the end. At no time was I lost as to what was happening in this story.
Good job!