Car Trouble by Kent Rosenberger
Posted: March 21, 2018, 01:47:32 PM
The story happens within a few minutes as a candy apple painted corvette waits at a red light.
Jessica the driver opens up her mind to her interior thoughts and feeling as she waits at the red light. Within two-and-a-half minutes the entire story unfolds and we begin to see that some creature with tentacles is hiding under a Volkswagens behind her. She tries to help out but can’t. The creature has uncanny hearing and looks when Jessica tries to open her door. The creature causes a flat tire on a pick up truck. Jessica knows the guy behind her is in big trouble but she can not do any about it.
An interesting story; I’ll not go into the main body because the ending opens up to a situation that I’m sure has happened many times: You see or are involved with an event, yet afterwards you can’t tell anybody about it because they’ll either think you're nuts or just a clown trying to tell a big one-----nobody will believe you no matter how hard you try! Consequently, you don’t tell anybody.
I truly wonder how many have seen space aliens and will never mention it? I know I wouldn’t.
Nice job pointing out how we might get into a true dilemma: If we don't tell, it will haunt us the rest of our lives! If we do tell, everybody will think us crazy!
Good Job
Jessica the driver opens up her mind to her interior thoughts and feeling as she waits at the red light. Within two-and-a-half minutes the entire story unfolds and we begin to see that some creature with tentacles is hiding under a Volkswagens behind her. She tries to help out but can’t. The creature has uncanny hearing and looks when Jessica tries to open her door. The creature causes a flat tire on a pick up truck. Jessica knows the guy behind her is in big trouble but she can not do any about it.
An interesting story; I’ll not go into the main body because the ending opens up to a situation that I’m sure has happened many times: You see or are involved with an event, yet afterwards you can’t tell anybody about it because they’ll either think you're nuts or just a clown trying to tell a big one-----nobody will believe you no matter how hard you try! Consequently, you don’t tell anybody.
I truly wonder how many have seen space aliens and will never mention it? I know I wouldn’t.
Nice job pointing out how we might get into a true dilemma: If we don't tell, it will haunt us the rest of our lives! If we do tell, everybody will think us crazy!
Good Job