Morning Starship by Paul Lubaczewski

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Morning Starship by Paul Lubaczewski

Post by Megawatts »

A captivating story and one that I enjoyed to the end. Good creativity by combining science and magic together. The story opens up in a bar setting with a conversation between the bartender and a patron.

The intro got my attention and the story held it until the end. Good dialogue, and believable characters----the bartender, Jacob Meijer, and the patron, Olivia wood.

The story unfolds by them talking and explaining their lives, and I must say they do have interesting lives! The dialogue between Jacob and Olivia was crafted very well and at no time was I confused or bored! Nice.

Very good job with this one!!!
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