Dragonfire by D.J. Tyrer

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Lipinski
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Dragonfire by D.J. Tyrer

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Reminded me of many things. Some wonderful memories actually.

For me, all poetry is interesting to read and to see the pictures painted in a readers mind by a mind feeling.

It's not important to your poem but for me to critique it would be only the use of the 'alien'. For me, it altered the poem.
It is not my poem but if it were, maybe I'd use a word such as, shadowed Dragon, Infinite Dragon. To me, the word, alien, means to activate the defense mechanism. To prepare for something bad... But, that's just me.

Thanks for sharing your poem.
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