Emma by Eric Emerson

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Lipinski
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Emma by Eric Emerson

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First off, nice title. Not for the name but the smooth mind-play with the letter 'e'. Most people will not notice but it's those little things that ring bells.

Now, as to this poem read. It caught me. It captured the mind in one hallway of a poetry style I love...and then, Pow! it takes an abrupt transition. "so u goin’ 2 dance wit me,
or should I find the Pellegrino?"

Thoroughly enjoyed the multiple layers and inputs to mind structuring.

Fun.
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