Forgotten Girl by J. Nichols

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Lipinski
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Forgotten Girl by J. Nichols

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Good job.

Usually 95% of what I read quickly bores what is inside, (aside from poetry. poetry rules all literature and when put to music, there is nothing better a human can produce... of course, all in my humble opinion). This piece though, caught my attention; first by title and then by content.

Not too many words as such the words used were used wisely.

Nice flow and plot.

Painted a nice picture.

Good job.
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