Scarlet Twilight by Denis Winston Brum
Posted: February 07, 2020, 10:56:01 AM
Mars! So many stories about Mars lately. I wrote one a few years back, and I love to read and write Mars stories and look at movies about landing there and finding aliens. The Angry Red Planet still sticks in my mind. I saw that movie in 1961 or 62 at a theater called The Lyric. It was just 25 cents to get in! Boy the good old day.
I liked this story. The intro got my attention and the story held it until the end. I got the feeling of Ray Bradbury’s writings a little as I read and thought about Victor and X’la.
Just image the loneliness that Victor had to handle. I don’t know if I could endure it.
Good word choices and believable dialogue. I liked how the author used short sentence for emphasis.
Good read, enjoyable and that’s what counts!!
Nice job!
I liked this story. The intro got my attention and the story held it until the end. I got the feeling of Ray Bradbury’s writings a little as I read and thought about Victor and X’la.
Just image the loneliness that Victor had to handle. I don’t know if I could endure it.
Good word choices and believable dialogue. I liked how the author used short sentence for emphasis.
Good read, enjoyable and that’s what counts!!
Nice job!