The Myth of Rain by Daniel C. Smith

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The Myth of Rain by Daniel C. Smith

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Wow. This is Hobbsian dystopia writ large from the headlines, and a dire warning of what may be to come. The ending is brutal and quick with its twist, and I find myself unsettled by the sparse but very effective sketch of the world presented, as seen through the eyes of a father trying desperately to hold on to what little he has left.

I'm reminded of another effective treatment of this idea, Zander Nyrond's song No Such Thing.

Well done.
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Re: The Myth of Rain by Daniel C. Smith

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While reading this story the only thought that dominated my mind was what I’d do in a world as described in the story. Yes, I could see how futile dreams about that future might be, and Sara’s future certainly appeared bleak.

A post apocalyptic world has many advantages for a writer: Usually society, the environment, and life as we once knew it now exists somewhere between tainted to complete destruction. A true jungle in which the writer’s imagination can freely exercises itself beyond preconceived or rational boundaries, in short, anything is possible.

A story about a father who knows what destiny will bring. And his daughter who dreams of a time she never knew, but wishes for.

Overlooking a few typos, the writing assumed a  professional quality for it was easy to read with no sharp jumps or wrong word picks. And it had a nice rhythm.


“In today’s world, dreaming was useless, but daydreaming was distracting, and therefore deadly.” ---------A passage near the end of the story.

Very nice thought! Bits of philosophy sprinkled though-out a story gives the story a sense of depth and dimension.

I liked it!!!
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