The Forest Lord by Amelia Brown

[Megawatts]

Nice intro for it grabbed my attention and held it throughout the story. Loved the use of descriptive adjectives and the occasional adverb. Just enough and not a deluge. Good sensory input. At times I felt as if I were in the story. All the elements needed for good story telling are present in this one. I would recommend that all writers read then re-read this story.


Very Good Job Indeed!!