Peach Clobber by William Joseph Roberts

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Peach Clobber by William Joseph Roberts

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A good ride for fans of first person shooters. The tale does build
suspense and achieves an exciting climax.
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Re: Peach Clobber by William Joseph Roberts

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Tightly-written, seamless, and fast-paced, with a solid plot. I thought the story arc and character arc were a bit shallow, but all the right parts were in all the right places, and it's easy to read and exciting.

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