Good Neighbor or Pickle Lotus

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Megawatts
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Good Neighbor or Pickle Lotus

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With the good use of sensory input, I could feel the ship, hear the slapping of waves against it and sense the dread that existed there. Very nice indeed!!

At pandemic-based story that has many twists and turns as it unfolds throughout the encounter with the ship.

Good narration and interesting word use.

The characters came alive to me for, as I said before, by the strategic use of sensory input. Too much sensory input waters the story down, not enough doesn’t add. A good balance between the two is present in this story which makes the sensory input work

With the use of viruses---I believe that the convid might have escaped from a lab researching how to weaponize viruses---any terrorist group could unleash one with ease!! This story could foresee some of the results of such weaponized viruses! I hope not!!

Good job!!
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