The Freezing by Vismay Harani

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The Freezing by Vismay Harani

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Nice beginning with the introduction of mental snakes. That’s gets one’s attention.

A story based on the old ‘nuclear war theme’ that once was so popular—how the survivors of a world-shattering event lived afterward.

The main character, Leita, became real to me as I read the story, but the others didn’t.

Good use of sensory inputs throughout this story, and descriptions of this world helped me visualize it.

Nice job!
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