Meet the Bartletts by Karen Yeo

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Re: Meet the Bartletts by Karen Yeo

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Nice attempt at comedy sci-fy and it was enjoyable. I do agree with Lee, but can add that Karen has talent by the way her imagination works!

I would take lee's advice on themes. Interject your love, hates, and wishes into you stories, for they will guide you.
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