A TRUE Ghost Story by Chris Sharp
Posted: December 20, 2007, 02:13:33 AM
I like this story because there was something simple and earnest about it with a light touch of humor!
Billy had to be schizophrenic and his mother must have been nuts also. I guess it’s in the genes! At first I thought another psycho in the works but as I read I realized it wasn’t a copy.
Some environmental input such as odors and sounds and maybe even feels might have added a little touch to the story, but as the story stands now, it’s good with me.
The shift to the first person at the end was fitting, since Chris was the one telling the story.
A simple well written story that holds you interest, is easy to follow and entertains you from beginning to end. What more do we want in a story?
Nice one.
;)
Billy had to be schizophrenic and his mother must have been nuts also. I guess it’s in the genes! At first I thought another psycho in the works but as I read I realized it wasn’t a copy.
Some environmental input such as odors and sounds and maybe even feels might have added a little touch to the story, but as the story stands now, it’s good with me.
The shift to the first person at the end was fitting, since Chris was the one telling the story.
A simple well written story that holds you interest, is easy to follow and entertains you from beginning to end. What more do we want in a story?
Nice one.
;)