Formal Dinner and Demon Dreams by Matt Spencer
Posted: January 20, 2008, 04:09:08 PM
I did not finish this story.
No author likes to hear this, and I'm sorry for that.
Still, it's better to hear something rather than nothing from your audience, and no one commented on this one. I made it about a fifth of the way, started skipping ahead. When I was about a third of the way, I threw in the towel.
Good title, but I was not hooked by the opener, and no other bits caught my eye as I skipped ahead. I sincerely hope that this was just me, that others finished, and that another Aphelionite can give a better review.
Best of luck, and again my apologies.
Nate
No author likes to hear this, and I'm sorry for that.
Still, it's better to hear something rather than nothing from your audience, and no one commented on this one. I made it about a fifth of the way, started skipping ahead. When I was about a third of the way, I threw in the towel.
Good title, but I was not hooked by the opener, and no other bits caught my eye as I skipped ahead. I sincerely hope that this was just me, that others finished, and that another Aphelionite can give a better review.
Best of luck, and again my apologies.
Nate