Re: November Flash Challenge - the Results
Posted: December 04, 2018, 06:21:07 PM
Congrats, Michele! Excellent work!
I made some very brief notes:
Last Night in Cancun--Head-hopping in first paragraph.
The Tale of the Blue Raven-- ***** [that's five stars].
Taylor and the Sloth--Surprising trick, with explanation.
My Old Were-ferret Plush...--Too much explanation--info-dump. Weak resolution; kid with no immigration papers.
AC/DC--Were-sex change? Novel idea.
I made some very brief notes:
Last Night in Cancun--Head-hopping in first paragraph.
The Tale of the Blue Raven-- ***** [that's five stars].
Taylor and the Sloth--Surprising trick, with explanation.
My Old Were-ferret Plush...--Too much explanation--info-dump. Weak resolution; kid with no immigration papers.
AC/DC--Were-sex change? Novel idea.