Alkyone By L. J. Geoffrion

Tell us what you thought about the September issue!

Moderator: Editors

Post Reply
Megawatts
Master Critic
Posts: 951
Joined: December 31, 1969, 08:00:00 PM
Location: Johnstown, Pa.

Post by Megawatts »

A good story line, and one that should be developed more.

The writing became choppy, and at times it didn’t hold my interest. Others probably don’t agree. I don’t like author Nelson Algren for the same reasons, yet he was a very successful writer following Theodore Dreiser’s thoughts on society. I love Dreiser, but can’t read Algren.
To me a little choppy and hard to follow.

But over-all the story showed a writer with talent and imagination.

Good attempt a story-telling.


Megawatts
Post Reply

Return to “September 2008”