Dammit, I thought I caught the typos (some of which are likely due to my editing anyway). The problem with the italics is definitely my fault -- missed a close-italics tag (again). Fixes will be made sometime tonight.bottomdweller wrote:Living here, in the best of all possible universes, I have a few grammer corrections for your review. Paragraph 6 from the beginning - "I the short run.." should be "In the short run..."
9 paragraphs from the beginning (Of this piece, not the beginning of all life) How about this: "I should just end it and be done. No good can come of this."
17 paragraphs from the beginning: "..in a grove of trees surrounded by..."
In the section that starts "Not-was let his consciousness sweep...":
5 paragraphs down "I will just take a walk around the garden area."
20 paragraphs down in that same section:
"Yeah, I know, she is bossy. She still thinks..."
And, of course the thing that makes me nuts, on page 11 of 14 the font changes into intallics all the way to the end of the piece...
Thanks
RM