Two Stone Trolls and a Prince

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Lester Curtis
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Sorry, but I didn't think much of it. It seemed vaguely monotonous to me, mostly in the pacing and overall rhythm of the story. Maybe too many words in it, too. Try reading it out loud to yourself.
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