Immortality Bites by Ray Prew
Posted: August 09, 2010, 11:12:12 PM
"Who wants to live forever?" Not me.
I thought it was delightfully ingenious the way the character came up with a way of funding himself with the adoption trick. That was about the only light thing I found here, though.
"Been there, done that, and invented the t-shirt" . . . well, he might have . . .
I liked it, especially for the questions he had about his immortality and why it seemed to be unique to him.
The only thing about this piece that bothered me was a sense of incompleteness, like it's all middle, with no beginning or ending, but maybe that was part of the point of it.
I thought it was delightfully ingenious the way the character came up with a way of funding himself with the adoption trick. That was about the only light thing I found here, though.
"Been there, done that, and invented the t-shirt" . . . well, he might have . . .
I liked it, especially for the questions he had about his immortality and why it seemed to be unique to him.
The only thing about this piece that bothered me was a sense of incompleteness, like it's all middle, with no beginning or ending, but maybe that was part of the point of it.